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Death Wish

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Literature Text

One, two, three, hold your
Pee and your breath, dearest friend;
For I am your death.
My first Haiku.

I know it's not a traditional Haiku because it doesn't have anything to do with seasons or nature but I think it's okay the way it is. I did include the 17 syllable, 5, 7, 5 in it, obviously and I used a 'kiru' (the cutting word/punctuation mark to 'split' the poem, creating two separate images for the reader).

I hope you like it :D
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ministreetmaster's avatar
Hah, ! nice, I like it :D