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my chopped fingers
lay askew on the floor,
my cut off feet
sit plainly on the table,

my bleeding body
lies limply in your arms.

a stab to the chest,
my still heart exposed
to you;
drop it in the box.

no time
for last words,
last breaths—
drag that dripping knife
where it belongs.

only you know.

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Mood: Wow! *Enchanted-Ink May 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Daaaaaamn!! That's all I could say after I read this... Damn!! I love the part:

"a stab to the chest,
my still heart exposed
to you;
drop it in the box."

Great imagery, like being "naked" with emotions laid out, and you have your heart out there for someone, and you want it back... Bravo!!
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~cardinal-hearts May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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*Enchanted-Ink May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :)
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