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Your words left more marks
Then any battle wound
Ever could.

Your words caused
Me to question my place
In this world.

Those unforgivable words
Left imprints on your fingers
And rings around my neck.

Without a second thought,
I allowed your words wrap
Around my neck

And complete your task
Of murder.
My mind, already gone,

My body, yet to suffer.
I gasp, unable to terminate my life,
I'm sorry.

Yet, those rings,
Still locked inside the glass;
Reminding me of you.
This was written about two weeks ago but I couldn't bring myself to put it here until now.

about being suicidal 3 years ago. I have to think about it a lot now with counseling.
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MummyWriter Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is stunning writing. I love the overall structure and flow of the piece
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cardinal-hearts Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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MummyWriter Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!
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DontAskWontTell Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
and sadly; i can relate too easily to this...
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cardinal-hearts Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:/
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Blitzer89 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012   Writer
I feel your pain through your words.
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cardinal-hearts Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was my aim :)
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Blitzer89 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012   Writer
You succeeded very well.
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cardinal-hearts Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: thank you
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Blitzer89 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012   Writer
You are very welcome.
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