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I forgot your smile,
your sinuous stride
and your coy,
yet confident air
when
I catch your gaze
you hold it there, trade
a stare—the constant clamour stops
for a moment
as you give your knowledge
in exchange for a caring thought.
your sinuous stride
and your coy,
yet confident air
when
I catch your gaze
you hold it there, trade
a stare—the constant clamour stops
for a moment
as you give your knowledge
in exchange for a caring thought.
Literature
Hate.
I hate myself.
I mean someone has to.
I look in the mirror and all I see,
Is someone ugly.
No matter how hard I try,
And no matter what I say or do,
I mess everything up.
Nothing goes right,
Everything goes wrong.
I can't do anything right.
I want to please everyone,
If I can't be happy then
I should at least make others happy.
I mess everything up.
I can't make anyone happy.
I hate myself.
So do me a favor,
And hate me too.
Because if you hate me,
Then I don't have to hate myself.
Literature
Should Have Known
Should have known
You should have has a clue
When I wiped a tear
Closed my book
The knife already pocketed
Should have known
You should have guessed
No one spends half an hour in a bathroom
With a blade
Without something wrong
Should have known
You should have called
Maybe you would have stopped me
I wouldnt have bled out
No one would read this
Should have known
You could have saved me
Maybe I'd be locked away
But alive
You could have saved me.
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so they can
wrists
arms
legs
skin
[scars]
feeling of i don't
know what
to
do
so help them
the ones who are being
BROKEN
fucking smashed shattered open
know the truth know love
hurts but it should never
hurt
like this people hurt but they
should never (.) hurt
like
this
it's unbelievable
find the words to say
or don't
just sit there
nod and say yeah yeah i know
because you do know
how they feel
and you do know
it's awful
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I may add to this but for now, it's complete.
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This has a lovely flow to it, and I like the isolation of 'when'. I also love how the entire piece is just one sentence; it really helps the way that the piece reads and, while of course it is entirely up to you, I think it might be a shame to lose that by adding more to it, unless you manage to add more and still keep it as one long sentence.